Josh May Unit 3 and 21

Learning outcome 3 (U21): Be able to pitch ideas on a proposed media product and respond to questions D1 (U21): Discuss the client considerations for the creation of the product from the pitch The feedback I am going to use to help improve my product is as follows: I will change colour blue to white to make it more visible as the client said the blue is hard to see and does not fit in as well as white would. This is useful as it will help make the front cover easier to read and the target audience will be more likely to buy it. This also makes it relevant to the brief as the front cover reasserts the imagery of the magazine being related to the grime music scene in north London. The client suggested moving the slogan from above the masthead to beneath it. This is conventional for magazine design and will make it is easy to see. I will be taking this piece of feedback on board. It is useful as it is what the audience expect to see. This is good as when the magazine is advertis...

Learning Outcome 3 (U21): Be able to pitch ideas on a proposed media product and respond to questions P4 (U21): Pitch ideas to a client M3 (U21): Show and understanding of feedback and be able to respond to questions Media pitch from Josh May Client Feedback The client suggested various areas I could improve on, as outlined below: Change colour blue to white to make it more visible as blue is hard to see and does not fit in as well as white would - From this I understand   t he writing on the front cover is important as it is these few sentences that will help to sell the magazine, especially to the target audience. As they are younger they will be more likely to pick up the magazine that stands out and is visually appealing to them. Move the slogan under the masthead so it is easy to see and can be seen in a snapshot -  My understanding is that the slogan is important therefore it must be easily visible as the slogan helps present the ide...